How can I reword this sentence?

How do I reword this sentence my teacher doesn't allow me to use the word it. How can i reword it (no pun intended) so i leave it (once again no pun intended) out? Also is it (pun intended) a run on? "It scares me to think that my sins may follow...

I have to write a graduation speech, and I'm thanking my Dad. I've tried to reword the sentence, but it looks awkward? "I’d specifically like to thank my Dad for filling both of the parental positions in my brother and my life, we wouldn’t be anywhere...

I am writing an essay so that I can transfer colleges, but I am stuck on how to word the first sentence. This is along the line of what i want to say... rhode island college taught me how i need to love where im at to be happy Please help, easy 10 points...

I am writing a paper and we arent allowed to site sparknotes but they have a really good quote form there that I want to use so how would i reword this to make it my own im so bad at this haha One of Jeffersons most lasting reforms as a legislator was...

The sentence is: "During her third and final task Ofelia performs the ultimate act of a hero: self-sacrifice." I had trouble trying to make this sentence sound right in the paper I wrote and my teacher marked it as needing correction and now...