Is this a good start for a story?

I want to make a story like Troy, thats realistic fiction because its custom story about the legend, but I need a good story to write about. I need something more epic than Troy and 300, that could end up being a 3 hr movie? The most epic and best hero...

I wanted to post this here because there's a lot more cool people in this category than other ^ ^. Well my story revolvees around Matthew Phoenix my protagonist. I don`t really want to reveal much because I think I started off good and it`s really started...

Okay, I am writing a story and I have it all planned out, I'm just having a problem with the beginning. I don't wanna, like, get into the good action-y stuff right away (at least 2500) words in, but I don't wanna be super boring in the beginning either...

my year 10 english class is doing a 1000 word story and the story has to be about crime. I need it to be good because i am in the top class

The story is called- love kills too I arrived at the cemetery alongside my mum and baby brother Lucas. The sun was shining down on us, the heat was overwhelming. The sun must have come out to say goodbye to Sam too. Just like all of the people currently...

I just wanted to know if the start of this story was okay? There were too many sounds for one person to recognize. Leaves rustled from the gentle breeze, grasshoppers and other insects created a symphony of summer. Mitchell ran his fingers through his...

Weeell, I'm writing a story about a bunch of teens, pretty similar to skins. But I'm doing it in first person and focusing on one character. Basically, she acts like a complete goody-two-shoes at home and pretends to be going to school and studying constantly...

"Welcome to Cliffwood University, miss Aly Crimson and Heather Lawrence." The principal, Miss Vivian Donahue, said as she handed our schedule for the school year. It was gorgeous. I mean the whole campus is covered with trees, students seem...

Before writing the first chapter I'm writing about a page from all the characters point of view, then I'm writing normal chapters sometimes from only 1 persons point of view sometimes with more than 1 persons point of view. Do you think this is a good...